Friday, February 19, 2010

An eternal evening



Sitting across the seas
Seasons of memories
I see through your eyes

A walk with you
at twilight times
watching those nature’s strokes
In blue, red and yellow

as we descend
on the edge of mountain
….. those
…..
birds returning to their nest
for another night of rest
herd of sheep on their way
encircles us
……to standstill for a moment
and bring us close with their command.

down few steps..
the flowing springs
without a break
day and night
singing along
with rubble and bubbles

a light or two, here and there
down in the valley
announcing birth of
their one night life
…..soon to replicate
the stars on ground.

holding your breath……
as if you could do
you start counting stars…
rhythm of your heartbeat
a symphony in my ears
touched, without touching
we sit on a rock to experience
an eternal evening!


Picture courtesy: blog.rrdphoto.com/2008/01/atlanta-ga-skyline-...

9 comments:

  1. Beautiful lines and sentiments... There is a wonderfully sensitive poet in you. Enjoyed this one.

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  2. just browsing blogs,found u,i must admire u r a wonderful poet...so sentitive

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  3. "a light or two, here and there
    down in the valley
    announcing birth of
    their one night life
    …..soon to replicate
    the stars on ground. "

    i totally loved these lines!! brill...

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  4. Hi
    That was nice easy and flowing.Sorry did not reply earlier to your query. Was off blogging for a while.Just got back.
    The address of the Resort is:
    "The Lake Village Heritage Resort,
    Kodimatha, Kottayam-686 039,
    Kerala, India.
    Phone : +91 - 481-2363637, 2363638
    Fax: +91 481 2363738 "

    Cheers Ram

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  5. Lovely Maddy. Had an easy flow to it and I could just visualize the scene. :)

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  6. wow!
    maddy,
    i can relate!brings back memories.once we climbed a hill,sat on a rock on top of it,the view of the land was exactly like this.saw rain from there,the most wonderful of my days!

    monsoon dreams

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  7. Lovely lines. Twilight becomes beautiful if you can walk hand in hand with someone towards the dipping sun or soak in the remaining rays but it can be trying if you are left alone to watch it.

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  8. spellbinding imagery!

    brilliant

    keep it goin;)

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  9. The emotion behind the impulse to write - beautifully caught in simple lines and lovely imagery. You really should catch up more such memories to let the poet in you write again.

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