
pitch black night
in my little cozy room
was staring at the ceiling
with my eyes wide open
but could not see anything..
....
few moments later
closed my eyes
the moment i close
i saw
a galloping horse
a smiling child
sunrise and sunset
lone camel in the desert
veiled women
flying birds
singing honeybee
kids playing
a beautiful art piece
chess board
a butterfly that flies...
…….
…….
…….
i wandered
through the mind’s eye
that never sleeps.
It would be better if you use your mind's eye to see more than these mere images, Maddy...
ReplyDeleteMind's eye can tell you much more..It does for me...and I have had been through a Hell..Now its trained to see only that it needs to see :)
wishes,
devika
Hmm.. My mind's eye never sleeps too :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeletevery true! we keep thinking even wen we r asleep :)
ReplyDeleteWOW ur a briliant poet too, apart from being a great philosopher!
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
Many a times, we get to see pretty pictures with closed eyes:-):-):-)!
ReplyDeleteNicely said! We sometimes see more with eyes shut.
ReplyDeleteCheers
preeti
Beautifully written. Reflects many like minded sights. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers
Anusha
was that a story narrated in form of poem or something like that.
ReplyDeletemust have been wonderful!
ReplyDeletethanks for the wishes..
ReplyDeletesometimes simple things are more complex arent they?
Right...Sometimes introspection happens when we least expect it to!
ReplyDeleteDevika..Good to note your experience and what your are trained to see that because of that.
ReplyDeleteSekar..Thank you.
Shiab...Thank you
Priya Joyce...True,sometime in the form of dreams too.
Keshi..That was agreat compliment but still I doubt if I am really!
Viji, You got it.
PS: Thanks for you visit.
Anusha..Thanks for your visit
Magiceyes...indeed it was
Swathy... So true, but sometime complex things are also very simple
Raksha Raman..Thanks for the visit
Very nice!!!
ReplyDeleteIf not for the minds eyes and imagination, the world would be a boring place....
:) I have also done this :) My mind never stops :) keep on thinking about something...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeletewow! what a flair for writing!
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